19 May 2006

Writing Poems

Some kind of
hunting has been
going on

and it’s the thrill
of capture
that I’m after,

the victory of
on a piece of life,

trapping it in
the net
of language

pressing it down
into black and
posted by Gilbert at Friday, May 19, 2006


Blogger Gilbert Koh said...

A poem from my juvenile days.

May 19, 2006  
Blogger Bluesky_Liz said...

I like this one, comparing the creation of a poem with capturing 'a piece of life'.

May 20, 2006  
Blogger dsnake1 said...

this is good, gilbert, as if writing poems is embarking on a hunt for prey. :)

May 20, 2006  
Blogger floots said...

loved this
it sums up exactly how i feel
the thrill of the chase
travelling hopefully etc
all captured in this poem
thank you

May 22, 2006  
Blogger Anonymous Poet said...

"the victory of
on a piece of life."

A wonderful sentiment for any artist, or for anyone who wants to live live to the fullest.

May 25, 2006  
Blogger sigmund fraud said...

Nicely put.

May 28, 2006  

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