16 November 2005

              Warning to a Lover

              Every time you try to change me,
              We run the risk I might.
              Two questions darkly cross my mind,
              So let them cross yours too –
              Could you really love another me,
              And would he, you?
posted by Gilbert at Wednesday, November 16, 2005


Blogger Lisbon said...


November 16, 2005  
Blogger Orso Dorato said...

Gilbert I love this poem, You put into words what i have been trying to do for a long time now.

November 16, 2005  
Blogger Bluesky_Liz said...

A very insightful warning.

November 16, 2005  
Blogger Alson Teo said...

In my case ‘Warning to my Wife’ will be more appropriate. Thanks for the post Gilbert. :)

November 17, 2005  
Blogger MQube said...

Nice...esp this

"Could you really love another me,
And would he, you?"

November 17, 2005  
Blogger Gilbert Koh said...

Thanks all, glad you enjoyed this little poem.

November 19, 2005  
Blogger pensivehour said...

Lovely poem, I enjoy it tremendously. Hope to see more of them. =)

November 22, 2005  
Blogger MercerMachine said...

Thank you, Gilbert.

November 25, 2005  
Blogger mrdes said...

Hi, I enjoy your poems, esp this, thks

December 04, 2005  
Blogger Lana said...

Hi. This poem is truly a work of a genius! I think you're really talented. Do you mind me posting one or two poems of yours on my blog? You will be duly recognized. :)


February 27, 2007  

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